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垂钓之怜鱼

[size=5][color=Navy]一池河塘万绦柳
几处弯来几道钩
丝线垂来多凶险
叹  
鱼儿慢慢游
勿贪嘴儿尽自由

愿作孩童塘边戏
手持顽石捉蛐蛐
恼怨柳根绊跌倒
嘻
石儿快快飞
你自入水鱼自去

这是本人近日较得意小文，之前有过此想法的意境 但是一直未成文
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[[i] 本帖最后由 ahu123321 于 2011-7-24 23:48 编辑 [/i]]

鱼儿鱼儿慢慢游
莫恋滩浅水温柔
若见丝线抛过来
走
大祸将临头
不是红线是钓钩

随意写的，勿怪。送一红心。

信手拈来的好句子，写的很好 意境很自在！

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